|
Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Jan 27, 2007 18:34:24 GMT -5
Dancing in the moonlight It’s such a site. The moon if full, And beautiful.
It’s not the sun, But just as fun. You can look at the moon, That much is true.
These are free, That’s what I wish to be. As free as the birds The fly around the world.
Not tied down, Held to the ground. I want to fly In the sky.
I want to be, As free, As the birds Around the world.
|
|
|
Post by Weird Rob 87 on Jan 27, 2007 23:12:59 GMT -5
Freedom or death! Pretty good man, you've got some good poetic skill. At least in my opinion.
|
|
|
Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Jan 27, 2007 23:53:11 GMT -5
Thanx man. Sometimes I get weighed down and I just wanna get away from all the weight and hassle and I just write and it comes out on paper.
|
|
|
Post by Weird Rob 87 on Jan 28, 2007 0:02:11 GMT -5
Ohh and no problem.
|
|
|
Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Jan 28, 2007 0:21:52 GMT -5
Some people choose to fight and then shortly after get arrested and go to jail while I think ahead several steps and think what will happen. So instead of me fighting and shortly after going to jail, I write down my problems in poem form.
|
|
|
Post by bgsgirl2006 on Feb 2, 2007 21:06:37 GMT -5
I love it this is one of your very best poems Teddybear!
|
|
|
Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Feb 2, 2007 23:06:11 GMT -5
Thanx babygurl, but I think youre just saying that to be moddest.
|
|
|
Post by bgsgirl2006 on Feb 4, 2007 20:09:57 GMT -5
no i am telling the truth, remember i too am a poet.
|
|
|
Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Feb 4, 2007 20:35:18 GMT -5
Quite true you are my dear...
A good poet if I do dare say so...
|
|
|
Post by bgsgirl2006 on Feb 4, 2007 20:48:45 GMT -5
u are a great poet i love reading your poems
|
|
|
Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Feb 4, 2007 20:51:37 GMT -5
Thanx, I think Im better at RP's though.
|
|
|
Post by bgsgirl2006 on Feb 4, 2007 20:53:19 GMT -5
you are great at both.
|
|
|
Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Feb 4, 2007 21:07:29 GMT -5
I guess you are right.
|
|
|
Post by Shooshoo on Feb 4, 2007 21:12:56 GMT -5
I guess you are right. whoa! such Modesty lol.... nice poem though....Elizabeth why dont you put some of yours up for us to read?
|
|
|
Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Feb 4, 2007 21:19:45 GMT -5
I owuld be intrested to read all the poems that you have Elizabeth
|
|