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Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Jan 15, 2007 20:38:35 GMT -5
Amidst solitude where even flame has frozen I seek this Join your soul to mine And warm me with your love Ah, my words of prayer quiver Ah, even if my fragile life is extinguished I follow the flow of the repeating cycles of reincarnation Gazing upon the destiny of an endless world You, whose song is sung and sung again, This evening you dose off, protected…
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Post by Shooshoo on Jan 16, 2007 13:23:30 GMT -5
Very nice HWM, you defiantly have a gift.
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Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Jan 16, 2007 19:29:42 GMT -5
Only when my heart will open.
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Post by bgsgirl2006 on Feb 4, 2007 20:16:50 GMT -5
I still have the copy of this that u gave. and i look at every second when i am not able to be with u.
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Post by Shooshoo on Feb 4, 2007 20:19:12 GMT -5
You should keep it safe Elizabeth, you never know HWM might become famous with his lovely sole searching poetry one day.
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Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Feb 4, 2007 20:41:09 GMT -5
Maybe I will become famous one day...
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Post by Shooshoo on Feb 4, 2007 20:43:52 GMT -5
Well I definitely think you have a gift where poetry is concerned, you should keep them all together in a book, maybe even get them published one day.
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Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Feb 4, 2007 20:46:40 GMT -5
I dont know, I dont like to show off. I showed Elizabeths friend Brittany one of my poems and she said that SH** is really deep. So I guess the occasional thats good will bbe fine for me.
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Post by bgsgirl2006 on Feb 4, 2007 20:58:22 GMT -5
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Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Feb 6, 2007 21:43:21 GMT -5
If I was motivated or somthing I might show them off. I think that if I do something and I htink its really hott then I would wanna show it off.
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Nemaisare
Warrior Hunter
The farther you are from the edge of reality, the closer you are to my world.
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Post by Nemaisare on Feb 6, 2007 21:51:04 GMT -5
hmm, I like this one, its... well, the wording... Ok, the first things I got was cold voice, warm love, eternal sorrow and broken determination to guard. Interesting, actually I really like it.
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Post by heavyweaponsmaster on Feb 6, 2007 22:02:41 GMT -5
[glow=red,2,300]Thanx, Im glad you like it. Sometimes I enter this mode of mine and I begin to write like this. you should look at my other poems and stuff.[/glow]
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Post by bgsgirl2006 on Feb 9, 2007 18:44:55 GMT -5
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Post by Shooshoo on Feb 9, 2007 21:15:01 GMT -5
awww dont feel blue Elizabeth, it will all work out in the end...
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Post by bgsgirl2006 on Feb 10, 2007 14:40:59 GMT -5
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