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Post by trekkiegirl on Jun 30, 2006 2:44:31 GMT -5
I still remember that day How ordinary it seemed You were taken away Oh, how short you lived.
Years and years, seemed to me like seconds When you were with me And they passed so quickly.
I still remember The way you held me tight, The way you completely obsessed my mind I can still remember The smell of your perfume It smelled of lily and some other tune.
Oh, how I loved those moments, let them be blessed I never felt like that in my life again.
I still remember The way they came to me And they said it, so firmly: "He'll never come back." And my life was crashed. It fell apart into million pieces Which I cannot collect on my own I need you to be the one again To help me feel like I've felt before.
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Post by drake on Jul 1, 2006 3:42:57 GMT -5
I'm not sure if its suppose to do this, but it makes me feel sad and reminds me of a speech I have to write for a funeral...
It is fairly well written, and I appluad that. Keep up the work.
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Post by Enchant on Jul 5, 2006 23:34:19 GMT -5
Awww *huggles* That is very sad...all I could think of was trying to comfort you... a very simple yet powerful poem....it takes a creative heart to effect emotion in others...
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Des!
Warrior
I ship the twins/me! lol
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Post by Des! on Jul 9, 2006 23:02:12 GMT -5
Wonderful piece. Makes the reader reflect a bit on life and love.
Like Enchant said, it takes a great talent to stir such a thing.
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Post by trekkiegirl on Jul 12, 2006 11:53:25 GMT -5
Thanks a lot everyone!
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Post by bgsgirl2006 on Mar 9, 2007 21:00:24 GMT -5
this is Bgsgirl2006 and this is a excellent poem. believe me i know a good poem when i see it.
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