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Post by Weird Rob 87 on Jun 12, 2006 1:16:52 GMT -5
I wrote this tonight when it popped into my head. Can consider it a poem or a song.. either way is fine with me. ANd here it is
Used but not abused, never knowin' a woman's love nor a tender touch. A touch lost to me as I aged. Always been used but never abused, in a way my used life is like an abusement or an amusement by some higher force. Coerced into a lonely but yet used life. Striving for something that I shall never have. That better half of me. But I know there is no better half, for that half has gone from life but into death. A woman's love and tender touch, lost to me through my aging life.
Many things are a lie, truth buried beneath so many lies. A sly smile on a snake's face. No aces to be found up his sleeves. I live used but not abused, then again a used life is an abusement brought about as amusement for some higher force. I am nothing more then a speck, a wreck upon humanity. The sanity I once had, held so sacred, now lost and replaced by sanity. A life of used abusement, never to know happiness. Only sorrow and despair. The hair upon my head, shortening or growing as time goes on, never stopped until I become old and no longer bold. This is my path, that of a loner, but at least that path will have good baths and cookies. Heh, maybe even a hooker! This is my life, one that is used and never loved. This is me.
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Post by Enchant on Jun 13, 2006 12:52:26 GMT -5
Its so depressing....but I can see it more as lyrics for a song....has a bit of raw feel to it, but brings out empathy in the reader....its good...
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Post by Weird Rob 87 on Jun 13, 2006 18:10:35 GMT -5
Thanks, its weird how it came to me while listenin to a rock band.
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Post by Enchant on Jun 13, 2006 21:27:15 GMT -5
Sometimes listening to music can be inspiring.....hearing a certain sound or range and it can just click something in your imagination and inspire you to think of something particular....when music can do that its art.
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Post by Weird Rob 87 on Jun 14, 2006 11:58:27 GMT -5
yeah, right on that.
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Post by bgsgirl2006 on Mar 10, 2007 0:06:49 GMT -5
sad but good
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Post by Weird Rob 87 on Mar 10, 2007 1:20:42 GMT -5
Thank you, much appreciated.
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Post by bgsgirl2006 on Mar 10, 2007 18:34:47 GMT -5
NO PROBLEM LOVE YA.
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