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Post by bloodyrain on Jun 5, 2006 16:01:18 GMT -5
Written May 30th, 2006
I am in an alley way, that is neverending. Maybe I will find the right path to leave, with knowing the reasons. Why I am in this dark alley, with all these questions.
In this dark alley, I get more and more confused, why I am here right now. Maybe if someone is looking for me, they can give me the answer, to finally leave this dark alley.
Leaving right now seems good to me, sick of looking for all these answers, of what, and what could of been. I just want to know the answers, to finally leave, and finally move on with my life.
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Post by Enchant on Jun 5, 2006 17:00:32 GMT -5
Written May 30th, 2006 I am in an alley way, that is neverending. Maybe I will find the right path to leave, with knowing the reasons. Why I am in this dark alley, which all these questions. In this dark alley, I get more and more confused, why I am here right now. Maybe if someone is looking for me, they can give me the answer, to finally leave this dark alley. Leaving right now seems good to me, sick of looking for all these answers, of what, and what could of been. I just want to know the answers, to finally leave, and finally move on with my life. It is really good, when I read it , it made me think of someone in need of closure...the only think is, I didn't understand the last sentence of the first stanza...could you explain that a bit more to me?
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Post by bloodyrain on Jun 5, 2006 20:01:23 GMT -5
Opps, my mistake. It is suspose to be "with"
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Post by Enchant on Jun 6, 2006 5:51:23 GMT -5
Opps, my mistake. It is suspose to be "with" I kinda figured that was what it was,but with poetry you cannot presume...Was it about closure?
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Post by bloodyrain on Jun 6, 2006 13:52:00 GMT -5
Yeah, I guess you can I say that. I need one answer from him to get closure, why he broke up with me.
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Post by Enchant on Jun 7, 2006 10:59:29 GMT -5
Yeah, I guess you can I say that. I need one answer from him to get closure, why he broke up with me. Awww *huggles*...I hope you get it.
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Post by bgsgirl2006 on Mar 9, 2007 21:07:37 GMT -5
this is Bgsgirl2006 and this is a excellent poem. believe me i know a good poem when i see it.
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