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Post by bloodyrain on May 14, 2006 20:19:53 GMT -5
Written May 13th 2006
I feel like I have to run away, to get away from you. I start to think, but I know I have to do.
I am sick of these tears, that I cry every night. For all the screaming, We do every fight.
I tryed to be your little girl, but it seems like you don't care. I try to care for you, but why do I have the feeling to spare.
Ever since dad died, you treat me like I am not there, or you fight with me for no reason, which isn't fair.
Now I am gone, because I couldn't handle it. Now I am gone, how does your like fit?
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Post by Evil3 on Jun 2, 2006 19:03:44 GMT -5
I thought your poem was very sad. It almost feels like you were crying when you wrote it. It has a empathy feel to it and makes me just want to hug you.
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Post by Evil3 on Jun 2, 2006 19:04:02 GMT -5
Wow definetly awesome. Very nice flow and word chose. Definetly makes you feel like you are there and can see some of the hurt and what going through the writer. Definetly a great poem .
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Post by bloodyrain on Jun 5, 2006 16:00:09 GMT -5
Thank You.
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Post by bgsgirl2006 on Mar 9, 2007 20:54:34 GMT -5
this is Bgsgurl2006 and this is a excellent poem. believe me i know a good poem when i see it.
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