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Light
Jan 27, 2006 17:40:13 GMT -5
Post by asparklefairy699 on Jan 27, 2006 17:40:13 GMT -5
A sky of stars Looks down at me, And by afar, They may give thee The truth on life Forevermore, What wonders have There been before? The swaying trees, The river's song Can't tell us where We all belong All we can do Is pray in sight That all on Earth Will hear pure light.
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Light
Jun 2, 2006 18:31:25 GMT -5
Post by Evil3 on Jun 2, 2006 18:31:25 GMT -5
I really liked this one, very good structure and the ryhme is nice. Im not sure what else i can say besides i liked it, i dont have any suggestions. Im not spamming i swear, i just liked the poem.
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