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Post by dinoson on Jan 21, 2006 10:58:31 GMT -5
Sunset Project X (A poem from a book I'm writing)
My Angel has a secret The bringer of salvation Who will wipe all of humanity With total devastation
My Angel has a secret Called Sunset Project X A masterpiece of design And intelligent of perplex
My Angel has a secret Who will release our very plot Upon the helpless citizens And their relentless puny lot
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Post by The Goddess Alexia on Jan 21, 2006 19:43:12 GMT -5
I like the rythim. It went well in my head and even though it was all like evil and stuff, it came off sorta cheerful in my head because of that.
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Post by dinoson on Jan 22, 2006 15:26:42 GMT -5
Thanks! Not quite sure what made me think of a poem like this, but in the end, it turned out pretty well!
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Post by The Goddess Alexia on Jan 23, 2006 17:29:40 GMT -5
yes it did, well done i hop to see more of you stuff around here ^^
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