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Post by dinoson on Nov 6, 2005 13:38:19 GMT -5
I poem from my Poetry Collection. ^_^
The moonlight touched the crisp morning dew The golden sun was rising, another day anew The sky burned with passion as it broke away the night It was the start of renewal; the land basked in its refreshing warm light The rush of the wind, lifts my spirits in the air As I feel the soft blades of grass, brushing against my hair The strength within my soul, guided by desire I set off to face the day, underneath the sun's burring fire.
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Post by Enchant on Nov 10, 2005 12:14:13 GMT -5
I poem from my Poetry Collection. ^_^ The moonlight touched the crisp morning dew The golden sun was rising, another day anew The sky burned with passion as it broke away the night It was the start of renewal; the land basked in its refreshing warm light The rush of the wind, lifts my spirits in the air As I feel the soft blades of grass, brushing against my hair The strength within my soul, guided by desire I set off to face the day, underneath the sun's burring fire. Very nice.....It flows very well and it gives of a great imagery feeling to it....I look forward to reading more of your work....
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Post by nightmaredragon on Jan 26, 2006 20:51:26 GMT -5
that was great I love to read more of your pomes
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Post by dinoson on Jan 26, 2006 22:56:32 GMT -5
I'll put up some more this weekend! ^_^
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Post by Evil3 on Jun 2, 2006 18:35:22 GMT -5
I thought it was a sweet poem, very expressive, and you used poetry and rythm very well, i give it a 8 on a 1-10 scale, nice job. ;D i liked it.
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