|
Post by kezzy on Jan 4, 2006 6:28:23 GMT -5
i dunno how it works around here...yet but i didnt want to make loads of posts with my poems in.. so i thought id contain them to one thread.. i hope this is ok Cest la vie
By Kerry Dudley
If i eat the wrong food so be it! If i wear the wrong clothes so be it! If i curse my kid so be it! If i hang with the wrong crowd so be it! If i like tom jones so be it! If i like to write poems so be it! If i die, where i lie, while the world passes by and everyone crys to the thought of lost lives then so be it Cest la vie...! Dont die... By Kerry Dudley
Dont cry i said to the voice in my head the day is near u may find someone dear
Dont worry i said to the voice in my head love will come before your done
Dont forget i said to the voice in my head you have your friends to make amends
Dont die i said to the voice in my head a shining star will take you far
Dont die i said to the voice in my head the shining light is your future so bright
Dont die i said to the voice in my head
Dont die i said....Shes Dead These were my first 2 poems ever written and i was lucky enough to have them published ;D
|
|
|
Post by kezzy on Jan 4, 2006 6:35:16 GMT -5
Our Children By Kerry Dudley
Our children are our life we give, we take, we sacrifice Our children are our heart' we teach them, guide them andgive them the best start Our children are the next generation we give them strengh & courage to try to fight for our nation Our children make our lives complete with their wit and joy they are so sweet Our children are our future next we show them the way to be the best
Look after them they are our treasure To have them was MY pleasure!
|
|
|
Post by Aaron on Jan 4, 2006 17:35:35 GMT -5
It's cool *S* Up at the review boards those are where the reviews go. -nods lots-
|
|
|
Post by Evil3 on Jun 2, 2006 18:42:15 GMT -5
I loved them...and I can see why they were published. They have a nice flow and easy to relate to. I did notice they were pertaining to death.. Was ther a death issue you were dealing with at the time? As for Our Children, I think I can relate to this one the most. I look forward to reading more.
|
|
|
Post by Evil3 on Jun 2, 2006 18:42:31 GMT -5
where did they go?funny you should say that, i actually wrote a note at the bottom when i first wrote them, that they didnt mean anything..just words edit: i see how this works now..
|
|