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Post by bloodyrain on Oct 30, 2005 12:27:41 GMT -5
The regret caused, gained me so much pain.
As the tear run down my face, thinking of this.
I lost you because of me, and hate you because of you.
I may have made a mistake, but I though you would of understood.
You are the piece of the puzzle, I need to complete it.
You said you loved me and it was a promise, Promises may be easy to break but hard to forget.
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Post by Enchant on Nov 13, 2005 9:23:38 GMT -5
The regret caused, gained me so much pain. As the tear run down my face, thinking of this. I lost you because of me, and hate you because of you. I may have made a mistake, but I though you would of understood. You are the piece of the puzzle, I need to complete it. You said you loved me and it was a promise, Promises may be easy to break but hard to forget. It si so simple...to be so powerful....this followinf line was awesome... I lost you because of me, and hate you because of you.I loved that....very nice....would love to read more...
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Post by bloodyrain on Nov 19, 2005 1:16:15 GMT -5
The regret caused, gained me so much pain. As the tear run down my face, thinking of this. I lost you because of me, and hate you because of you. I may have made a mistake, but I though you would of understood. You are the piece of the puzzle, I need to complete it. You said you loved me and it was a promise, Promises may be easy to break but hard to forget. It si so simple...to be so powerful....this followinf line was awesome... I lost you because of me, and hate you because of you.I loved that....very nice....would love to read more... Thanks.
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Post by Enchant on Nov 19, 2005 8:33:07 GMT -5
It si so simple...to be so powerful....this followinf line was awesome... I lost you because of me, and hate you because of you.I loved that....very nice....would love to read more... Thanks. you're welcome....I would love to see you around more....hope everything is alright....and definately would like to read more of your poems...
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Post by Aaron on Nov 27, 2005 13:39:33 GMT -5
You have a pretty powerful writting style and also definetly can tell lots of things going on in your life. It does gette better..especially when your out of the house.
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