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Post by christabel on Feb 13, 2005 5:14:07 GMT -5
Lonely Star Lonely star, my only light comforting me on a sleepless night. I can't sleep, my emotions run too deep. My flowing tears, do you know my fears? Dark loneliness, I must confess, I fear the most, for 'tis despair's host.
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Post by mizuhime on Feb 13, 2005 17:48:13 GMT -5
beautiful flow, and it sound slovely. Very good job, you have a talent for poetry.
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Post by fairyqueen on Feb 14, 2005 6:06:17 GMT -5
short and sweet....just beautiful! i love it.
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Post by christabel on Feb 14, 2005 8:55:41 GMT -5
Thanks for the compliments. I wrote that poem one night when I for the love of it couldn't sleep and just felt like crying. It helped.
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Post by Enchant on Feb 14, 2005 9:18:39 GMT -5
I agree short and strong....you do have a way with words.....I shall be watching for further postings of your work....
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Post by fairyqueen on Feb 16, 2005 6:11:03 GMT -5
wow it's almost something i do when i can't sleep, but i draw instead though i'm not that talented with words..
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