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Post by asparklefairy699 on Jan 22, 2006 10:37:24 GMT -5
Title: A Princess Tale Genre: Fantasy Rating: G to PG Author: Erica McAllister Main characters: Katrina, Erica Summary: A princess faces danger while on a quest to save her sister.
Chapter 1: Princess and Princess
Katrina was a princess who lived her mother and father in the kingdom of Katryncia. She had a sister called Erica. The two princesses lived a happy life. They had everything. It was all just like that. Two princesses. Sisters. Love. They had all that they wanted. They got along very well. They were always together, no matter what. But all that was about to change...
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Post by asparklefairy699 on Jan 23, 2006 6:41:39 GMT -5
Title: A Princess Tale Genre: Fantasy Rating: G to PG Author: Erica McAllister Main characters: Katrina, Erica Summary: A princess faces danger while on a quest to save her sister.
Chapter 2: The Caper
Erica was outside in the field when she saw something coming straight at her! She ran and ran until she finally saw the palace. The little princess saw no guards, so she tried to climb over the palace gates but just as she reached the top, she felt something grab her foot! Erica felt her grasp on the gates break. "HELP!" she yelled as she was dragged away from the palace.
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Post by voltage on Jan 23, 2006 20:29:41 GMT -5
mm Is this a short story?
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Post by asparklefairy699 on Jan 24, 2006 18:45:02 GMT -5
mm Is this a short story? This is a children's fairy tale.
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Post by voltage on Jan 24, 2006 18:49:40 GMT -5
Children's StoriesNot to be a pain but its a whole different world of compliments and critisicms when you identify its a childrens tale.
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Post by The Goddess Alexia on Jan 25, 2006 17:00:33 GMT -5
complements have nothng to do with it. actually this should be in the childrens story section
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Post by voltage on Jan 25, 2006 17:05:55 GMT -5
Lol whatever reason you need.
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Post by Aaron on Jan 25, 2006 22:19:31 GMT -5
Okays...I'm going to stick this over in the children's section. Also any thoughts replys are to be done up on that catagory's reply board. The reason why you see reply's on already done threads is that the boards are new. Not even 6 months old. We just created them and it's easy to find the continuation on the over all story. So that way not digging through pages and reply's.
Thank You, Aaron
It is interesting having paragraphs for each chapter.
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Post by asparklefairy699 on Jan 26, 2006 19:21:34 GMT -5
Title: A Princess Tale Genre: Fantasy Rating: G to PG Author: Erica McAllister Main characters: Katrina, Erica Summary: A princess faces danger while on a quest to save her sister.
Chapter 3: A Quest
When Katrina heard her sister's first cry, she ran out into the field. But Erica was gone! "Erica! ERICA! ERICA!" Katrina called. No answer. Just then, Katrina saw a trail of mysterious footprints leading into the dark forest. NO WAY was Katrina going in there! But she had to save her sister! Very quietly, Katrina tiptoed into the forest, hoping she would not be seen by a specter.
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Post by asparklefairy699 on Jan 29, 2006 15:45:51 GMT -5
Title: A Princess Tale Genre: Fantasy Rating: G to PG Author: Erica McAllister Main characters: Katrina, Erica Summary: A princess faces danger while on a quest to save her sister.
Chapter 4: Sister, Sister
Erica found herself in a dark castle. "H-hello?" she said. A figure came into view. She wore a sparkly black dress that went along with her apperance. She had long, black finger nails and hair. Her eyes, too, were outer space-black, as was her glittering tiara. But her skin was as WHITE as snow! "Sister! Sister! Help me!" Erica cried.
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Post by asparklefairy699 on Mar 20, 2006 9:35:39 GMT -5
Title: A Princess Tale Genre: Fantasy Rating: G to PG Author: Erica McAllister Main characters: Katrina, Erica Summary: A princess faces danger while on a quest to save her sister.
Chapter 5: Laverna
Katrina wandered into the woods, hoping she would find her sister. Something was in the moonlit lake. "Hellllo!" cried a voice. Katrina ran to the lake. There, in the sparkling waters, was a mermaid! She wore yellow, and had brown hair. Her eyes were as blue as the lake. "My name is...uh...Katrina," said Katrina. "I'm Llllaverna!" cried the mermaid. "I llllive here in the llllake!" Katrina told Laverna about her problem. "Wellll," said Laverna, "I suppose I coulllld hellllp you."
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Post by Evil3 on Jun 2, 2006 18:52:20 GMT -5
I think the story has started off nicely...short but sweet...I look forward to seeing where you go with each submission....
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Post by Evil3 on Jun 2, 2006 18:52:41 GMT -5
again , nice additions....be interested in seeing where it goes....
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Post by Evil3 on Jun 2, 2006 18:52:58 GMT -5
Its a nice update and now Katrina has a freind to help here...look forward to reading more
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Post by rpqueenlee on Nov 16, 2006 14:10:42 GMT -5
Hmm not what i expected, maybe for this thread with each Paragraph you could make a child like drawing with Paint ;D
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