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Post by Enchant on Mar 21, 2005 19:16:29 GMT -5
Well once the board starts grwoing and becoming more jumping, I think they will....I would like to think so....
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Post by mizuhime on May 28, 2005 23:21:49 GMT -5
The Tides of darkness advance And I stand alone upon the shores Fighting day and Night Bleeding and without rest
Each wave stronger then those before My Soul my Blade, my mind my Armor Both cracking and weakening Wondering if the next wave will be my last
But still I fight each wave While asleep or awake There is no escape As I’m slowly consumed by the dark
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Post by Enchant on May 31, 2005 13:40:34 GMT -5
The Tides of darkness advance And I stand alone upon the shores Fighting day and Night Bleeding and without rest Each wave stronger then those before My Soul my Blade, my mind my Armor Both cracking and weakening Wondering if the next wave will be my last But still I fight each wave While asleep or awake There is no escape As I’m slowly consumed by the dark Its a bit on the dark side.....seems to be a shout of depression and stress.....someone has alot on there mind....*huggles*...its very good....I hope your waves lower ......
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Post by mizuhime on Sept 17, 2005 11:23:31 GMT -5
I thought we could co-exist I thought we could be friends I thought could share it all I thought we could defeat anything together
Instead you threw me into darkness Instead you tried to erase me Instead you took my half of the world Instead you tried to destroy me where I stood
You thought you could lock me away You thought I would disappear You thought you could take all I held You thought me wounds were fatal
Left in darkness to never see Left to bleed to slay my strength Left me in chains, never to move Left alone to never be known
I’ll break free from these chains I’ll tear down the darkness I’ll cast you aside I’ll shatter your soul
My Fury will tear down the gates of your empire My strength will take the mind and soul My mind will push you aside My hands will soak in your blood
Now you must be kept from mind Now you must be torn from the heart Now you must be thrown from the souls thrown Now you must fall
This war you can not win This body is mine, though your image befouls it This mind becomes mine more each year This blade will make you no more
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Post by Enchant on Sept 18, 2005 3:11:59 GMT -5
WHOA!!!!!
As I was reading it, I was invisioning a person so torn down pulling themself up and standing with some diginity, and then it slowly morphed into a inner battle..like a split personality type thing and then it mropled again into the once meek, now standing tall with revenge and persuit of victory within a war...I didn't know weather to cheer or gasp....
This was very cool...I like how it pulls you along the path....very cool.
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Post by Aaron on Sept 21, 2005 17:41:40 GMT -5
wow definetly some very very powerful and emotional poems in you'r writtings. Can tell that maybe alot of this is you and your feelings. The course of life from the most extremes to the middle grounds. Thank you for sharing these with us.
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Post by Enchant on Sept 23, 2005 16:03:26 GMT -5
I would like to see you do a different genre , perhaps a epic type, just to see how you would do it....because you already know I am a fan of your work
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Post by mizuhime on Nov 5, 2005 15:14:24 GMT -5
i would not know how to write an epic poem.
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